Maybe I'm just being picky here, but I don't think it was great this edit was approved.
- NTP doesn't actually support changing the port number, so the comment about that is useless
- The monlist command was indeed removed in later versions, but including configuration suggestions here seems pretty out of scope.
The sentence structure here is a bit odd now as well.
Am I just being too picky because this was an edit of one of my posts?